winter.

I cant wait for it to actually be warm outside again. So the next thing I am looking forward to is SRING BREAK! It will be warm and there will be no more snow or ice or anything that is cold/depressing. I am so ready to just be able to walk outside and not have to have a huge coat on and boots so I dont fall and slip on all the ice on the ground.

Einstein

Im not sure what that is completely about but it seemed to be talking about the unknown. Einstein talks about poeple and how they should be educated. He also believes that people make up the world as a whole. The world doesnt make up all the people. I think he is also talking about how people have to work together to keep away any evils that could be. If everyone works together than everything will be good.

Mike Adams

In the Mike Adam's "The Dead Grandmother/Exam Syndrome" there are some good points about how different elements can affect the death of an individuals grandmother. On the other hand how can it be proven that this persons grandmother didn't have a preexisting condition and it was just unfortunate enough to take their life around exams. Mike Adams says "It might also explain the disproportionate number of grandmothers in the victim pool,since they are more likely to be susceptible to strokes." That is the only medical information in here as to why grandmothers die. There could be hundreds of other reasons why someone died around the time of exams. Strokes may be a high risk in grandmothers but its not the only medical problem they could be at risk for.

Wedding.

The wedding that I went to last Saturday was beautiful. It wasn't a huge wedding it was in a small church but it was pretty much full. Both the bride and groom wore white which I thought was so cute because they both made a commitment and had held true to it. The best part of the wedding besides them saying their vows was when they released these two white doves. I had never seen anyone do that so it was really cool to see that.  The reception was the best part though. Everyone had a great time and it was just so much fun seeing those to with their families and having a good time.

Advertisements.

The first ad is more of an invoked audience because the ad states "Dark just got fun." This is geared towards young children who enjoy playing games. If the children see that red M&M playing they may want that candy just because it has something they can relate to on it.
The Tommy Hilfiger is also an invoked audience because this ad is towards women and is suppose to make them feel like if they wear that specific perfume they will be as beautiful and desirable as the woman on the add.
The Slim Fast ad is an addressed audience because the ad is trying to address women who are getting married or will be getting married sometime in the future. The ad is trying to tell them that if they drink that then they will lose weight.

October 9, 2010

This Saturday a close friend of my family is getting married! I am so excited for him. He is a super shy guy and we always wondered if he would ever get a girlfriend. He finally did and after being together close to 2 years they are getting married. The wedding is going to be a this small church and they invited 500 people. I can only imagine how packed it will be but it will be the sweetest thing ever. They are so cute together. I am so excited for the wedding and then the reception will be fun too.

writing process.

My writing style is pretty basic. There isn't anything fancy that goes into it. I just think about the topics given and then I pick something that I know I will have enough information to make is long enough. Once I have decided I just start writing as if it was the rough draft I was going to use. I just start writing then I reread what I have written and make changes were they need to be made. After I have written the introduction and changed what needed to be changed, I rewrite the introduction on a new piece of paper. Once I have that written down I start on my body paragraphs and go from there. I always write it out by hand so I can make changes on the paper to physically see that the change makes more sense. Once I have written the draft and have made all the changes then I type my final draft.